tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6450087739317969489.post5801886907974163966..comments2023-06-11T06:38:39.879-04:00Comments on Child of a Frosty Morning: Musings of a Well-Traveled Southerner: This Sunday LC is on the bus again, contemplating a long-ago transformationCarolina Lintheadhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16335905555994442416noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6450087739317969489.post-79258175793370454342010-09-08T22:02:28.140-04:002010-09-08T22:02:28.140-04:00Coming late means everyone has said what I would h...Coming late means everyone has said what I would have stated, so I simply echo the others. Bravo.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6450087739317969489.post-77842017743436398122010-09-07T05:02:45.090-04:002010-09-07T05:02:45.090-04:00Yes, ice-cold but very strong, and stunning use of...Yes, ice-cold but very strong, and stunning use of repetitions.<br />Beautiful photographs too.Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6450087739317969489.post-49154699260550660622010-09-06T16:59:24.894-04:002010-09-06T16:59:24.894-04:00The 'some might say' repetition is very ef...The 'some might say' repetition is very effective. I need to go and put on a sweatshirt.Peter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6450087739317969489.post-32298627214892677262010-09-06T07:47:47.036-04:002010-09-06T07:47:47.036-04:00Well said, Lydia. Thanks, y'all!Well said, Lydia. Thanks, y'all!Carolina Lintheadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16335905555994442416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6450087739317969489.post-61299051612746225442010-09-06T03:29:48.223-04:002010-09-06T03:29:48.223-04:00Brrrrrrr...what a poem!
I do hope this coming wi...Brrrrrrr...what a poem! <br /><br />I do hope this coming winter will be kind to us all, as I hope we will be kind to one another keeping this phrase in mind:<br /><em>Cold, too, are faces<br />that seem to look intently<br />but do not see within the silent man<br />the whimpering child.</em>Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6450087739317969489.post-44472066836989124082010-09-05T16:45:53.242-04:002010-09-05T16:45:53.242-04:00this really does read as it means to be felt... be...this really does read as it means to be felt... beautiful stuff!Batteson.Indhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10846214578565824955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6450087739317969489.post-19416824672966818222010-09-05T16:22:54.465-04:002010-09-05T16:22:54.465-04:00This really captures an incredible a sense of hope...This really captures an incredible a sense of hopelesness. And the refrain is perfect - it says so much so simply.Pure Fictionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04265599089734430505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6450087739317969489.post-50473971128213157382010-09-05T11:04:58.594-04:002010-09-05T11:04:58.594-04:00a very lonely piece, strong with it though. love t...a very lonely piece, strong with it though. love the icy arrow in the frozen winter skyNiamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6450087739317969489.post-91877874439717569542010-09-05T09:16:30.724-04:002010-09-05T09:16:30.724-04:00Oh, man, but this makes me shiver. Beautifully wri...Oh, man, but this makes me shiver. Beautifully written. I can FEEL the anguish, the cold, the sting. Well done!altar egohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11564052536173244610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6450087739317969489.post-29348034498063526492010-09-04T19:23:12.987-04:002010-09-04T19:23:12.987-04:00Relentless cold, even the sun is cold.A sense of h...Relentless cold, even the sun is cold.A sense of hopelessness and the sword of Betrayal explains it all.Powerful and well written. Love your pic of the winter sunset.<br />Glad you got on the bus and not under it!Totalfeckineejithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6450087739317969489.post-21462237487260526252010-09-04T18:33:34.951-04:002010-09-04T18:33:34.951-04:00A haunting poem, dark and very powerful. The repet...A haunting poem, dark and very powerful. The repetition gives your words a solemn emphasis.Sam Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01014838954712295981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6450087739317969489.post-3478329422181206182010-09-04T16:59:21.620-04:002010-09-04T16:59:21.620-04:00Hunted and haunted - a thrust from a trusted sword...Hunted and haunted - a thrust from a trusted sword... I've felt this myself, after betrayal. Well said!The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.com