Sunday, January 22, 2012

Magpie Senryu

Since Tess has made us ponder, er, sushi...ahem...I've chosen to write senryu, of a sort (Thanks, Heaven, for reminding me of the difference between haiku and senryu! This definitely involves human nature and humor:-):



A present? For me?
A gift-wrapped, bare-assed brunette?
Thanks! You shouldn't have...

Artists love their nudes...
Willowy, supple bodies...
Mouthwat'ring visions.

She takes center stage...
Luscious, exquisite, ready
To be devoured.

Dab of wasabi
Drizzle of soy...senses are
Open for bus'ness!

Succulent tidbit
Ready to pop in my mouth
Sex on a rice ball!


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10 comments:

  1. CatalystJanuary 22, 2012 at 6:35 PM

    Well, hell, I like it. Even making "mouthwat'ring" a 3-syllable-word to keep within haiku rules! Good one, prof!

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  2. JeannetteLSJanuary 22, 2012 at 8:31 PM

    I could pretend not to like it, but that would be an absolute lie. I'm with Kat.

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  3. ScarletJanuary 22, 2012 at 8:34 PM

    This is a senryu poem...nice rice ball of words ~

    http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.com/2012/01/sevenling-woman.html

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  4. Brian MillerJanuary 23, 2012 at 12:06 AM

    that could truly be a nice dish...to be savored under the right circumstances...smiles.

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  5. BerowneJanuary 23, 2012 at 7:11 AM

    Very well done. I'll be senryu...

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  6. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 23, 2012 at 10:11 PM

    oh, my, sex on a rice ball.

    sushi is well understood.

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  7. Tumblewords:January 23, 2012 at 11:34 PM

    delicious.

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  8. TMTWJanuary 24, 2012 at 2:34 AM

    Haiku or senryu... I call it excellent!

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  9. NCmountainwomanJanuary 24, 2012 at 4:48 PM

    Whatever you were using...the outcome was great. Perfect for the photograph!

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  10. HelenaJanuary 25, 2012 at 8:07 PM

    I'll eat anything covered in enough soy sauce.......

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