Sunday, February 5, 2012
A Russian Magpie
Cold Warrior
The Moskva in winter...
Iron water painted by snow.
She and I, bundled, tangled,
Nursing our warming tryst...
Gushing...all that the Moskva
In winter is not...fluid...
Lusty nights, scant daylight
By which to come up for air.
No cares we had that season
Hidden in the teeming city...
Not pretty, but the trains
Always ran on time, afraid
To do otherwise...people died
For such oversight, did they not?
In our little kvartira, the sting
Of secret police was forgotten.
Come spring, she begged
To stroll in Novodevichy,
To gaze upon monuments
Mute, some new, many old,
All cold stone, stark reminders
Of the fate awaiting us:
Ruby cheeks fade to gray,
Hands, hearts, all wither.
Too soon the fateful day came
As I knew it must...duty called.
A coded note, blind dropped
A single line, a chilling phrase...
My glaciated heart crumbled.
Russians don't do happy endings,
She once told me...prophetic...
She barely felt the needle's prick.
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I love the depth here. Had to read it a few times for the lead up to that last verse. Simply stunning.
ReplyDeleteWow! Dostoevsky lives!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful write...deliciously dark and Zhivagoesque...
ReplyDeleteI love this poem you painted with your words, contrasting the warmth of love with the cold of winter and the secret police. I'm glad the characters had 'that season' together. Chilling.
ReplyDeleteLoved this one!
ReplyDeleteNice!
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
ugh...the order we hope to never receive perhaps...but duty is duty...smiles.
ReplyDeleteRussians don't do happy endings
ReplyDeleteNo fairytales and "happily ever after" in Russia! Great write.
oh dear this was wonderful
ReplyDeleteAnother of my favorites this week.
ReplyDeleteYou nailed it.
=)
soooooooooo good...thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteThank you for this
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Wander
Dark and lovely. I'll be back to read it again and again.
ReplyDeleteStunning reflection.
ReplyDeleteYour poem overwhelms .. in a good way!
ReplyDeleteFine poem. Worth many readings.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful wonderful write. Stunning indeed!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
You paint an intriguing vignette with your words, Michael.
ReplyDeleteYou are piercingly honest in your expressions...
"Ruby cheeks fade to gray,
Hands, hearts all wither."
Dang. That's good.
A lovely write !
ReplyDeleteMany layers.
ReplyDeleteBrrrrr.
;)
Love this!
The Collage Pirate