Since Tess has made us ponder, er, sushi...ahem...I've chosen to write senryu, of a sort (Thanks, Heaven, for reminding me of the difference between haiku and senryu! This definitely involves human nature and humor:-):
A present? For me?
A gift-wrapped, bare-assed brunette?
Thanks! You shouldn't have...
Artists love their nudes...
Willowy, supple bodies...
Mouthwat'ring visions.
She takes center stage...
Luscious, exquisite, ready
To be devoured.
Dab of wasabi
Drizzle of soy...senses are
Open for bus'ness!
Succulent tidbit
Ready to pop in my mouth
Sex on a rice ball!
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11 comments:
Well, hell, I like it. Even making "mouthwat'ring" a 3-syllable-word to keep within haiku rules! Good one, prof!
No apologies, this is as hot as wasabi!
I could pretend not to like it, but that would be an absolute lie. I'm with Kat.
This is a senryu poem...nice rice ball of words ~
http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.com/2012/01/sevenling-woman.html
that could truly be a nice dish...to be savored under the right circumstances...smiles.
Very well done. I'll be senryu...
oh, my, sex on a rice ball.
sushi is well understood.
delicious.
Haiku or senryu... I call it excellent!
Whatever you were using...the outcome was great. Perfect for the photograph!
I'll eat anything covered in enough soy sauce.......
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