Sunday, January 22, 2012

Magpie Senryu

Since Tess has made us ponder, er, sushi...ahem...I've chosen to write senryu, of a sort (Thanks, Heaven, for reminding me of the difference between haiku and senryu! This definitely involves human nature and humor:-):



A present? For me?
A gift-wrapped, bare-assed brunette?
Thanks! You shouldn't have...

Artists love their nudes...
Willowy, supple bodies...
Mouthwat'ring visions.

She takes center stage...
Luscious, exquisite, ready
To be devoured.

Dab of wasabi
Drizzle of soy...senses are
Open for bus'ness!

Succulent tidbit
Ready to pop in my mouth
Sex on a rice ball!


Sorry, that's all I got...this is a Magpie Tale. To read more or to participate, click here!

12 comments:

Bruce Taylor, a.k.a. Catalyst said...

Well, hell, I like it. Even making "mouthwat'ring" a 3-syllable-word to keep within haiku rules! Good one, prof!

Kat Mortensen said...

No apologies, this is as hot as wasabi!

JeannetteLS said...

I could pretend not to like it, but that would be an absolute lie. I'm with Kat.

Heaven said...

This is a senryu poem...nice rice ball of words ~

http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.com/2012/01/sevenling-woman.html

Tess Kincaid said...

Delicious...

Brian Miller said...

that could truly be a nice dish...to be savored under the right circumstances...smiles.

Berowne said...

Very well done. I'll be senryu...

Summer Rain said...

oh, my, sex on a rice ball.

sushi is well understood.

Tumblewords: said...

delicious.

Autrice said...

Haiku or senryu... I call it excellent!

NCmountainwoman said...

Whatever you were using...the outcome was great. Perfect for the photograph!

Helena said...

I'll eat anything covered in enough soy sauce.......