Now You See Me
By Lemuel Crouse
A simple trick, really:
Glass backed with shiny...
A finely polished
Bit of light magic.
Enigmatic plane,
Giving no thought
To the tragic act
Playing before it.
I am drowning in memory!
Fighting, sinking, dying,
Last time going under?
I wonder as blood
Thunders in my ears.
I would gladly shed tears
If I had any left.
I am bereft of them.
Confounding mirror
Showing no horror...
How can it NOT
See the monstrosity
That stands before it!
Infernal broken pane,
Silent within your frame,
Reflecting...nothing?
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11 comments:
I wonder why this prompt has prompted so many bloggers to wonder who they are? But yours is a better ordering of the question than most.
Thanks, Doctor FTSE. When I saw the prompt, I knew this was coming. As for Lemuel Crouse, let's just say he has image issues...
I like mirrors becos I don't really see the obvious!
mirror at crossroads
Nice Magpie- well done!
Powerful writing, I really liked this. Great Magpie!
My Magpie
Powerful take on a simple reflection. Nice write.
Dark and potent. This piece really reads nice out loud, Dr. L. Nice.
dry of tears,
blame the mirror for noting see your horror,
wow.
love your beautiful imagination.
a creative piece.
masterfully done.
The poet Lemuel Crouse thanks you! Currently, he is brooding over the moon that was setting this morning as I drove to school. Willow, I considered recording this one! I did, on re-reading it aloud, think that monstrosity worked better than abomination.
ah but that which stands in the reflection is great than even our eyes can see....smiles.
Reflecting nothing? Wow. Nice Mag. Love and Light, Sender
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